Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children? Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
Latest advancements and researches in the scientific areas have developed so many vaccines which can protect children from the various diseases. A section of mass believe that government should strict towards get vaccinate every children against the common diseases while others think that it should be the personal choice of the parents whether they want to immunize their children or not. This essay will delve into discussion both the perspectives followed by my own opinion in the impending paragraphs.
The first and the foremost reason as to why some people think that it should be the legal responsibility of the parents to immunize their children is because of to prevent the spread of some diseases. To elaborate, not only this exercise will ensure that children are given the best possible protection against the some incurable diseases, but also it will protect nations from any epidemic situations. Resultantly, it will lead to eradicate several diseases from the regions. For instance, as government of India had made polio vaccine compulsory in 1950’s, now this disease is totally vanished from the country, which has only happened due to the intervention of government.
On the contrary, some people who think it is their own right whether to get vaccinate their child or not, affirm that not every child is a candidate for vaccine, some exceptions should be made. To explain, since some children born physically weaker than other kids, vaccines can cause harm rather than good if these use without any doctor’s prescriptions. Consequently, these parents goes through a proper diagnostic procedure and if require, they get immunize their children. To exemplify, according to a report submitted by medical department of National Geographic in December 2018, the tribes which are living in deep Amazon forest have no contact with the outsiders; hence, they are not exposed to typically many diseases that affect children.
In my own opinion, I believe that parents should firstly go through a proper diagnostic procedure through which they can identify the pros and cons of applying any vaccination on their children because it can protect their kids from any harm of the vaccines.
To recapitulate, it can be concluded that although it becomes imperative for the administrative authorities to strictly implement about some immunizers to protect its people from any pandemic situation, but before implementing it is important to ask from the parents about any other medical problems of children. According to me, there should be a proper diagnostic is required before applying any vaccination on children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, so, while, as to, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30455635492 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83781110207 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515587529976 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 688.5 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0648483004 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.0 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7857142857 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366775325524 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130830621052 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749445002288 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221980212221 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616605888831 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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