The role of government has become a debatable issue. Some natives believe that government should only provide services related to defense, infrastructure and electricity. However, other services should be given by other private companies. I think government and private firms should joint their hands together for the development of country. This essay will discuss the reasons behind such need with some feasible conclusion.
To begin with, The revenue of government mainly comprises tax money so it is quite difficult for the authority to allocate money on all sectors with the need of the natives. I think Government should allocate money on defense and infrastructure because both sectors are vital for the security and development of the country. If government spent money on defence then they would be able to protect the country from enemies like terrorist attack, war etc. In the same time, funding in infrastructure helps to raise the economy and also promote international business. Therefore, some private companies should come forward to provide services to the community.
Moreover, these firms helps to upgrade the nations with new technology and bring advancement in all sectors. For example there are many private institutions and hospitals in India which serve the public with latest development like smart classes and new technology to curb major diseases like cancer, heart attack etc. Hence, this will not only enhance the economic growth but also helps to curb major concerns of the nations like unemployment, health issues, poverty and so on.
In conclusion, no doubt government is obliged to serve the country through services. It is also suggested that private companies and society as a whole come forward for the well being of nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35125448029 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7583107899 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7313147345 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198821220406 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705163311649 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049964425165 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118435570305 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070025486513 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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