With the spread of world wide web online shopping has become more popular .In this era ; it is very commy among human to buy new things frequently . unfortunately ; it also encourages them to throw away old one .I firmly believe this trend will bring negative effect on the environment .
To embark on; there are plethora of reasons behind this ; first and foremost ; there are number of products advertisement running on the t.v .Which attract tu human as well as increase their productivity in the market. For instance ; every year companies launch a new model of smart phone . Even though it would provide wit same functionality as previous one .But the reason of buying it only the popularity of behind this thing then it bring curiosity among masses that what is the new in that product . moreover these days life is so busy and fast thus nobody have a enough time to repair old thing thus they go with new one.
Admittedly ; this trend have some negative too. As we know that these days environment is the biggey phenomenon in all over the world .As well well ; increasing in purchasing on things leads to the reduction of the natural resources .For instance dwellers are cutting number of trees for making household items .As a consequently .it will damage to environment . Additionally if folks will replace their previous things with new one than it encourages to heavy garbage in the empty places which bring harmful diseases like malaria; dengu and it will ruin to local human's life . because some consumers goods have non recyclables so willingly or unwillingly people will throw litter in such places beacuse they do not left more option.
To conclude . although changes always bring positivity but if it the change are damaging to around the surrounding area then we have neet to work on it where we are mistaking.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nline shopping has become more popular .In this era ; it is very commy among human...
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...e wit same functionality as previous one .But the reason of buying it only the pop...
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...wit same functionality as previous one .But the reason of buying it only the popula...
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Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
...popularity of behind this thing then it bring curiosity among masses that what is the...
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... that what is the new in that product . moreover these days life is so busy and fast thu...
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...he new in that product . moreover these days life is so busy and fast thus nobody ha...
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...fe is so busy and fast thus nobody have a enough time to repair old thing thus th...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ly ; this trend have some negative too. As we know that these days environment is ...
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Suggestion: days'; day's
...ome negative too. As we know that these days environment is the biggey phenomenon in...
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... biggey phenomenon in all over the world .As well well ; increasing in purchasing ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: well
...ey phenomenon in all over the world .As well well ; increasing in purchasing on things le...
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...aking household items .As a consequently .it will damage to environment . Addition...
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...sequently .it will damage to environment . Additionally if folks will replace thei...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...uently .it will damage to environment . Additionally if folks will replace their previous th...
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...ing harmful diseases like malaria; dengu and it will ruin to local humans life . ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87781350482 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59389177805 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620578778135 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.7873475768 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.909090909 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2727272727 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119148498157 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394327642733 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239624397803 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0648735772914 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263425985675 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... online shopping has become more popular .In this era ; it is very commy among hum...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...nline shopping has become more popular .In this era ; it is very commy among human...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...among human to buy new things frequently . unfortunately ; it also encourages them...
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Suggestion: Unfortunately
...ng human to buy new things frequently . unfortunately ; it also encourages them to throw away...
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...so encourages them to throw away old one .I firmly believe this trend will bring n...
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Suggestion: I
... encourages them to throw away old one .I firmly believe this trend will bring ne...
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...bring negative effect on the environment . To embark on; there are plethora of ...
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...roducts advertisement running on the t.v .Which attract tu human as well as increa...
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...ducts advertisement running on the t.v .Which attract tu human as well as increase th...
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Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...panies launch a new model of smart phone . Even though it would provide wit same f...
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...e wit same functionality as previous one .But the reason of buying it only the pop...
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Suggestion: But
...wit same functionality as previous one .But the reason of buying it only the popula...
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Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
...popularity of behind this thing then it bring curiosity among masses that what is the...
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Line 5, column 503, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ses that what is the new in that product . moreover these days life is so busy and...
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Suggestion: Moreover
... that what is the new in that product . moreover these days life is so busy and fast thu...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: moreover,
... that what is the new in that product . moreover these days life is so busy and fast thu...
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Line 5, column 521, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...he new in that product . moreover these days life is so busy and fast thus nobody ha...
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Message: The pronoun 'nobody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ys life is so busy and fast thus nobody have a enough time to repair old thing thus ...
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Line 5, column 568, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...fe is so busy and fast thus nobody have a enough time to repair old thing thus th...
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Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ly ; this trend have some negative too. As we know that these days environment is ...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...ome negative too. As we know that these days environment is the biggey phenomenon in...
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Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... biggey phenomenon in all over the world .As well well ; increasing in purchasing ...
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Suggestion: As
...iggey phenomenon in all over the world .As well well ; increasing in purchasing on...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: well
...ey phenomenon in all over the world .As well well ; increasing in purchasing on things le...
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Line 7, column 233, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...o the reduction of the natural resources .For instance dwellers are cutting number...
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Suggestion: For
...the reduction of the natural resources .For instance dwellers are cutting number of...
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...mber of trees for making household items .As a consequently .it will damage to env...
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...er of trees for making household items .As a consequently .it will damage to envir...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...er of trees for making household items .As a consequently .it will damage to envir...
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...aking household items .As a consequently .it will damage to environment . Addition...
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...sequently .it will damage to environment . Additionally if folks will replace thei...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...uently .it will damage to environment . Additionally if folks will replace their previous th...
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Suggestion:
...ing harmful diseases like malaria; dengu and it will ruin to local humans life . ...
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Line 7, column 566, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...laria; dengu and it will ruin to local humans life . because some consumers goods hav...
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...u and it will ruin to local humans life . because some consumers goods have non r...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...and it will ruin to local humans life . because some consumers goods have non recyclabl...
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Suggestion: .
... do not left more option. To conclude . although changes always bring positivit...
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Suggestion: Although
... not left more option. To conclude . although changes always bring positivity but if ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87781350482 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59389177805 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620578778135 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.7873475768 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.909090909 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2727272727 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119148498157 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394327642733 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239624397803 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0648735772914 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263425985675 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.