The line graph reveals information about the average maximum temperatures in different months of a year in Auckland,Christchurch,London,Edinburgh.
Overall,it can be clearly seen that both cities of United Kingdom followed the similar trend in beginning and ending with the lowest temperature while the alternative two cities have various progressions.
It is vivid from the line graph that during the initation of january the the average temperature of London and Edinburgh starts from the lowest point of6°c and it rise to15°c and 20°c in may.Whereas te temperature of both cities of UK reached to its peak in the middle of june to22°c and 18°c respectively.However the temperature of London and Edinburgh falls down to thesame lowest point at the end of the period to 6°c.
Moreover,in Auckland and Christchurch the temperature started at the highest point of approximately23°c and 24°c and it gradually drop down to 9°c and 15°c in July.Subsequently the temperature of the cities of New zealand again started esclating with the minimal difference of 1°c in the month of august.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Christchurch
...n different months of a year in Auckland,Christchurch,London,Edinburgh. Overall,it can be ...
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Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , Edinburgh
...f a year in Auckland,Christchurch,London,Edinburgh. Overall,it can be clearly seen that...
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Suggestion: , it
...hristchurch,London,Edinburgh. Overall,it can be clearly seen that both cities of...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erature while the alternative two cities have various progressions. It is vivi...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ph that during the initation of january the the average temperature of London and Edin...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ph that during the initation of january the the average temperature of London and Edin...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f january the the average temperature of London and Edinburgh starts from the low...
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Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rises'?
Suggestion: rises
...arts from the lowest point of6°c and it rise to15°c and 20°c in may.Whereas te tempe...
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Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Whereas
...f6°c and it rise to15°c and 20°c in may.Whereas te temperature of both cities of UK rea...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: However
...le of june to22°c and 18°c respectively.However the temperature of London and Edinburgh...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...le of june to22°c and 18°c respectively.However the temperature of London and Edinburgh...
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Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'thesame the lowest'.
Suggestion: thesame the lowest
...e of London and Edinburgh falls down to thesame lowest point at the end of the period to 6°c. ...
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Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...he end of the period to 6°c. Moreover,in Auckland and Christchurch the temperatu...
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Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'drops'?
Suggestion: drops
...oximately23°c and 24°c and it gradually drop down to 9°c and 15°c in July.Subsequent...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Subsequently
...ually drop down to 9°c and 15°c in July.Subsequently the temperature of the cities of New z...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Subsequently,
...ually drop down to 9°c and 15°c in July.Subsequently the temperature of the cities of New z...
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Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in July.Subsequently the temperature of the cities of New zealand again started ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40697674419 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.14310990125 2.65546596893 156% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.4926829268 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.406645511 43.030603864 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 232.5 112.824112599 206% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.0 22.9334400587 187% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.23603664747 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326790487175 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199445743672 0.103423049105 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635451032804 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199445743672 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635451032804 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.6 13.2329268293 193% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 61.2550243902 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 10.3012195122 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.99 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.9970731707 175% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.