Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
Now, people have become more adventurous as compared to past. Thus, they feel hobbies can be enjoyable only when they pursue excitement activities like sky diving, climbing and so on. I think it does not matter which activity has opted in leisure time as everyone has their own choice. This essay will discuss the reasons behind pursuing past time in terms of choice and interest rather than with level of difficulty.
To begin with, I think people choose hobbies to refresh and reenergize themselves. Natives especially youngsters prefer to have those hobbies which make them happy. For example, it is published in India today Newspaper that 85 percent of people enjoy those hobbies which provide them inner satisfaction. Therefore, activities like listening music, playing games, etcetera can give much happiness which they might not get in difficult activities. Moreover, Easy activities are easy to Learn, creative and give opportunity to find hidden talents of a person such as c. Hence, these do not provide only way of passing free time but also enhance skills in an individual.
Furthermore, difficult activities are very risky. Although, it develop confidence and braveness in human being but it directly put life of person in danger. Even in worst situation, it may lead to health disastrous. For instance, nervous breakdown, heart attack and so on. Besides this, if a person want to pursue such activity then he/she has to take proper training and equipment along with themselves which sometimes upset the budget of a person.
In conclusion, I think hobbies play a crucial role in this hectic world. Everyone should choose those activities which gives them happiness and satisfactory rather than selecting those ones which are difficult and not interested to them but popular among people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23367697595 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64296245309 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639175257732 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4612677366 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5882352941 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1176470588 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76470588235 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123966745388 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389978017805 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038033609021 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714349961848 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258644107379 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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