why telivision has become the most preffered option in free time and how this activity has made the people lazy and lack in social interaction
In this technological world it has been seen that television has become the most preferred option of people in their free time. Hence, it has made them lethargic and restricted from interacting with others. I think television has played a major role in making people passive. This essay will discuss the reasons and its impact on individuals.
To begin with, there are a plethora of reasons but the fundamental one is availability of large number of channels on television of every genre. As they can watch their favourite show with just one press. They do not feel bored and tired while watching Tv. If they are not liking any show, they can change it and watch it from the variety of different channels like sports, movies, entertainment, knowledge etc. Furthermore, people feel this activity as a relaxing activity and used to overcome their stress and tiredness. Although I also believe it reduces our burden but watching it for long hours will have more adverse impact on our health like effect on eyes, sitting in the same position cause muscle pain and without any physical activity it makes body unfit and obese.
Moreover, when people watch shows for long hours they surrounded themselves with the imaginations of shows especially children and youngsters. They are mentally indulge in fake world which directly impairs their physical and mental growth even in worst situation they become social isolated because they preferred to spend time on watching it rather than to have some quality time with family and friends. Besides this, Due to introduction of reality shows, premiere of latest movies and live sports and shows people do not bothered to visit any other place for leisure time.
In conclusion, no doubt television played a vital role in enhancing knowledge and provide information about nation and the world but its excessive usage should be controlled so that people become physical active and social interactive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... channels on television of every genre. As they can watch their favourite show wit...
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...ed and tired while watching Tv. If they are not liking any show, they can change it and watch ...
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Suggestion: indulged
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Suggestion: in the worst
...s their physical and mental growth even in worst situation they become social isolated b...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...introduction of reality shows, premiere of latest movies and live sports and shows people...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...troduction of reality shows, premiere of latest movies and live sports and shows ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, while, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09404388715 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59187561504 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592476489028 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7902181986 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190689593514 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731751208571 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785741865285 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130272546129 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758001591139 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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