Some natives are of believe that privacy of celebrities should not come under the scrutiny of media. However, others argue that they should accept it as a part of their fame. I think media should understand the importance of privacy in their life. This essay will discuss the reasons behind the both perspective with my opinion and conclusion.
On the one hand, media should understood the importance of privacy in their life as they also want some space from their role of entertainer and lead a simple life. Moreover, sometimes media report false information about the celebrity to the public which directly impacts their career. Hence, it leads to depression and in some worst cases, some celebrities commit suicide. Besides this, media even invade privacy of their kids and brought them in limelight due to which they do not feel freedom when they go public which deprive their innocence and make them mature soon.
On the other hand, celebrities should accept it as a part of job because when they signed as a famous personalities they must know they are coming under the billions of cameras. Hence, they should not become hesitant towards reporting. Furthermore, these are the role model of youth. Thus, they are always keen to know about their celebrities likes, dislikes, struggle etc. Which motive them to do hardwork and persuade a successful life. Last but not the least, it is the also the medium for these personalities to share their opinion ,private life to the public.
In conclusion, I think it should be in the hand of celebrities like what, when and how much they want to disclose their private life and Media also understand the need Of privacy in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91258741259 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49452674869 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513986013986 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8456071037 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209911236014 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809576276496 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441309427441 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148986948462 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687207526653 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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