Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Popular figures suffer from the lack of privacy in their lives, this is due to the media following them and interfering in their lives in a very annoying way. Most fans believe that this is a normal matter since they are being loved, others believe that this must have a limit and the privacy of the celebrities must be saved. I personally believe that privacy should be cherished no matter how well known and loved a person is.
As for some whom believe that it is fine for media to invade the personal space of a celebrity, they ought to follow those loved icons all the way they can. They admire every single bit of their lives, despite how this could harm them or become a burden on them. Although those exact people could be very protective of their privacy, they take away this right from the ones they look up too and consider it a normal matter for being a well-known figure in the society and for being loved.
Others look at the situation as this is an indesirable act. No matter how much loved an individual is there should be a limit for the media to follow. law should apply penalties on news reporters who take photos or record incidents that was not planned to be shared with the public. This causes severe impacts on famous individuals. When unexpected situations happens and are caught on camera it becomes a scandal. I remember I read about a suicide committed by a movie star who was caught over drunk after a party and saying bad words and performing detrimental behaviors, after being sober he was so ashamed of himself to the extent that he ended his life.
In conclusion, singers and actors have the same rights in the society as an ordinary individual and it should be respected, despite what others wants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, as for, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58333333333 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36123776587 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554487179487 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8696214701 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178455704148 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669687032753 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040467951864 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107470532927 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053870753822 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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