Without the shadow of doubt famous people have always been under heavy presure because of intrest that others have in their life. As some people may think that since this group of people are attractive they do not deserve a private life, others may think vice versa. As far as I am concerned every one has a private aspect of life which should not be exposed to others. So I think they should have more privacy.
First and foremost, even though news about celebrities are a good source of income for magazines, revealing a person's personal life to a bulk porportion of society can cause a scandle for that person because most of the time reporters distort the news. There are things which can happen within the private life boundry and it is normal but having a majority of people knowing it is not pleasant for that person. An example can account my point. A friend of mine whose name is Billy is a singer in Iran and has numerous adherents but paparatzies are always around taking picture from him. Once he had a fight with his wife and as a result reporters were informed about it. The next day he saw that in magazines they had hit his wife which was not true. Also form that day for a long period people questined his reputation for a fake news.
Another reason one should take for this significant is it might cause them to leave their line of work in order to only find some peace. Having every one looking at your life can cause disturbance in one's life. An instance of this is what happened to a favoriate artist of mine whose name was Ali. He was a music composer and one of the brightest minds that I have ever seen. For a period of time in every newspaper was news of his private life such as where he was, when he met others. All these complexity in his life caused him to leave what he was doing best and one day he anounced that he will never again compose another music and was going to abondone his country. Since then no one knows where he is and what he does he do as a result the society lost one of its best artists.
To wrap it up, all aforementioned reasons and examples advocate the fact that even celebritys need to have a privacy in their life becaus it can reveal facts in altered ways or even cause them to leave their work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...vate life, others may think vice versa. As far as I am concerned every one has a p...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...urce of income for magazines, revealing a persons personal life to a bulk porportion of s...
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Line 3, column 753, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ey had hit his wife which was not true. Also form that day for a long period people ...
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Line 3, column 758, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
...d hit his wife which was not true. Also form that day for a long period people quest...
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Line 3, column 758, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'forms'.
Suggestion: forms
...d hit his wife which was not true. Also form that day for a long period people quest...
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Line 3, column 826, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'fake news'.
Suggestion: fake news
...iod people questined his reputation for a fake news. Another reason one should take for...
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Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...g at your life can cause disturbance in ones life. An instance of this is what happe...
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Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...test minds that I have ever seen. For a period of time in every newspaper was news of his priv...
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Line 5, column 492, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this complexity' or 'these complexities'?
Suggestion: this complexity; these complexities
...s where he was, when he met others. All these complexity in his life caused him to leave what he...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, so, then, i think, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 55.0 24.0651302605 229% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33490566038 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19999008865 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514150943396 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6060684785 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7368421053 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3157894737 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78947368421 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121549961817 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409812143769 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444309888113 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820163104839 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159993583899 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.13 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.