Paparazzi are notoriously known for their habit of invading the privacy of the celebrities. While some people think that the price of fame needs to be paid, others believe they must be left alone during their private expeditions. In my opinion, not every time is a good time to click a picture, so the actors/actresses should be given some personal space. This essay will discuss both views in depth and suggest why it is not a good idea to follow the celebs everywhere.
To begin with, famous people are humans just like ordinary people and have the right to privacy. The showbiz journalists destroy this private space when they pursue the stars everywhere for the single best shot for their page 3 article. For instance, sometimes the media people click and post an article that is embarrassing at times to sell the paper or increase traffic on websites online.
On the other hand, others believe that a lack of privacy is the cost of being famous. Artists and sportspersons enjoy a luxurious lifestyle and they are the idols of many individuals. People want to know each and everything about them hence, it becomes necessary to capture every moment of their life for the sake of others. For example, there are articles in the newspaper about the fitness regime of many sportsmen and their diet. So, many people who want to be just like their favorite star can emulate their regime and diet.
In conclusion, while there are people who think it is ok to haunt the celebrities for their pictures, as it is a price they pay for being famous, there are also people who believe otherwise. This essay discussed the two sides and suggests that although it is important to provide insights on celebs’ personal lives, they should do so without harassing them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: articles
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81907894737 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54132866189 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0152200952 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.642857143 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294771952673 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966321521402 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494808908903 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177769802601 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584083791579 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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