Task 1 - Test 8 - Cambridge 12
The diagram highlights the process by which geothermal energy is harnessed so as to generate electricity, with five steps in the process, from consuming cold water to supplying electricity to the national grid.
The first step is to hold the abundance of cold water in the reservoir above the ground. Once being pumped roughly 4.5 Kilometer down, cold water is injected well into horizontal hot rocks called Geothermal Zone. After passing this area, the hot water is well ready for the next step in which it is pumped up around 4.5 km, and then entered into the Condenser.
Turning to the structures on the ground, the condenser produces the high pressure steam. To generate the power for the generator, the turbine is rotated by the steam. Finally, the generator produce electricity for the national grid.
Overall, it is interesting point that how we are able to provide electricity in a green process (by using Geothermal power plant) from the cold water.
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The diagram below shows how geothemal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 89
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 79
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...by which geothermal energy is harnessed so as to generate electricity, with five steps i...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so, then, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 167.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99401197605 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65136301738 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616766467066 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5091735399 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0172709741891 0.244688304435 7% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00630816724924 0.084324248473 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0109794443697 0.0667982634062 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0080277459796 0.151304729494 5% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0103062124676 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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