The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it is believed that increasing myriad of obesity is forcing on the clinical care to cope with this health issue, few individuals are asserted that it would be added more body exercise in enlightenment centre for tackle this hazardous cause. I completely disagreed with given fact, nonetheless there are plethora of solutions like control on diet as well as join a gym also can reduced the effect of obesity.
Taking the first support, each person should take care of eating habit, it is having said that junk food highly affects the human body which cause fat level increases constantly. For an instance, a person who is careless of their eating habit; moreover, they are eating lots of junk food like pizza as well as too much fatty food which causes, its leads intensify their body fat and become fatty. Due to this, healthcare system needs to cope with this problem. Hence, obesity is detrimental, not only for individuals but also clinical care.
Taking the last support, it is believed that there are numerous people who leads to sedentary life style due to monotonous routine for that gym is the only best way to decrease the level of fat; furthermore, it is leads to healthy life. This is why, every individual needs to do an exercise for vigorous life. Therefore, it is not a school responsibility to deal with it, but individuals should care.
In conclusion, it is having said that health is the real wealth of everyone, I strongly believed that exercise in gym and controlling in diet it leads healthy lifestyle, as a result one can become fit as well as not burdening on health system, it can be envisaged that extra precaution of fatty food would tend to stay fit.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81911262799 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59515864575 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532423208191 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.923730488 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.2 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174893512131 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765582706406 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591851206614 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103646848959 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313363576678 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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