A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
Although an increasing number of human beings believe that animals should not be used for satisfying people's personal needs and that they ought to have same rights as people, others believe that animals should be used for various purposes, including food and research.
On the one hand, some people consider that animals should not be used for selfish reasons by human beings and ought to have similar rights as people have. These people believe that people have no right to cause pain to animals by experimenting various drugs on them, as they cannot justify their suffering. Take for example, according to research in western part of India, 55% of teenagers between the age group 17-22 were against the trial of new drugs on animals because of the suffering they undergo. Furthermore, people also think that it is against the moral right of human beings to kill animals for food.
On the other hand some individuals opine that there is no wrong in killing animals to produce food or try new drugs on them. These people are of notion that animals are below them in food chain, so it is acceptable to kill them for food; for example, eating meat helps to maintain protein and carbohydrate level in human body. Moreover, it is necessary to advance in research and develop new drugs. So trying the authenticity and reliability of these drugs on certain animals is of no harm. For instance, a chicken is short-lived, so trying a specific drug to check the viability on them will not only provide results faster but also will help to know if there are any other side-effect on next generations.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion about animal rights, I think human beings ought to use animals for food and developing new drugs, as eating animals helps individuals to maintain balanced diet and research is crucial for discovery of important drugs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87774294671 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48770919624 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507836990596 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0417539129 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.454545455 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6363636364 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470380827346 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193745134596 0.084324248473 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150253218649 0.0667982634062 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.338067370685 0.151304729494 223% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145234525162 0.056905535591 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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