The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.
Do you agree or disagree?
With the advancement in information technology, e-commerce has witnessed a significant boom: particularly in the last 5 years. Revenue generated from online sales has been increasing at such a rate that marketing experts fear that in coming years, online retailers will predominate the major market share resulting in the closure of traditional stores and outlets. I believe that the day is not far when 100% of the transactions would be done online using mobile phones or computers.
The most obvious reason for the seismic shift of shoppers towards e-commerce is convenience. Office workers who used to spend hours in the market are now ordering groceries, clothes, and food from online retailers that runs 24 hours and 7 days of the week. In addition, online platform has provided market access to a wide variety of suppliers resulting in an immense pressure on them to offer competitive rates to consumers. Clearly, online purchasers have flexibility in term of timing and price option.
Another reason behind the success of online businesses is the operational cost. In other words, companies are no longer required to operate fancy and exuberant stores in high-rise shopping malls neither there is a need for opening outlets in other cities for geographical expansion. Nonetheless, there may be a need to set-up warehouses in major cities but running a warehouse is considerably cheap compared to a well-decorated shop in commercial centers.
To conclude, e-commerce is beneficial for both businessmen and consumers and is taking over the market share at a fast pace. Commercial hub will eventually be disappeared from the world maps sooner or later.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, nonetheless, so, well, in addition, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30943396226 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98331422404 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637735849057 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5739486917 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135550667408 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418934252679 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288811432021 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071749553502 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336757162121 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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