Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">Everybody desires to be happy in life and interestingly the requirements to be cheerful vary from person to person. this is the main reason why defining happiness is not that easy. However, there are some common things that are regarded important to be delighted in life.
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family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">defining happiness is quite challenging because the requirements to achieve it is not fixed. While someone dreams that his economic freedom would make him happy, a very rich man dreams about having a caring family to be happy. Similarly, a couple who do not have any child think about having a baby all the time and would be ready to do anything for that. On the contrary, many poor families, mostly in poor countries, find more children to be their burden. The practical world is quite puzzling and the humankind wants more than they have. when a person’s aim or expectation is fulfilled, he wants more and this is a never ending process. this is why happiness is not a simple word that we can describe with a neat and precise definition.
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family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">However, there are some vital factors that are commonly regarded as the main ingredients to be happy in life. First of all, physical and psychological soundness is very important to be happy and people can truly realise that when they get sick. economic freedom - ability to fulfil the needs in life, is the second most important factor to be happy, in my opinion. it is often said that being happy with an empty stomach is not possible. Thirdly, having a happy family where members love each other and care for them is considered important to be in peace in life. it is usually rare to find a happy person who does not have a pleasant family. Individual freedom is also considered a great influence to be happy in life. someone without personal freedom cannot feel the happiness. most importantly, being contented in life is the key to being happy. If someone can be contented with whatever little he has, he will be happy in life.
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family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">In conclusion, though there is no easy and precise definition of happiness, common attributes like sound health, caring family, freedom and personal contentment are regarded to be key ingredients to be happy in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, similarly, so, third, thirdly, while, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 41.0 13.1623246493 311% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2660.0 1615.20841683 165% => OK
No of words: 460.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78260869565 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.81365384587 2.80592935109 136% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445652173913 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 735.3 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 118.994559604 49.4020404114 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9047619048 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47619047619 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166117900977 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842654280866 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756815295863 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833712464152 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099079324211 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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