Higher education could be funded in three ways. All costs paid by the government, all costs paid by students or students paying all cost through a government loan. What are the advantages of these choices?
Students have different options to pay their fees for tertiary education. It can be either funded by the government or fully paid by the student themselves or alternatively supported by loans provided by governmental authorities. This essay agrees that students should be given an initial support, however, they should ensure to pay off as installments gradually. This essay will discuss the benefit of all the three options.
There is little doubt that government support for university education would be of great help to students and their families. Such support would make sure more and more students have opportunity to go for higher education thereby making the world a better educated place to live. The southern state of India is a prime example, where all undergraduates are encouraged to go to university with the support of local panchayat office.
An alternate option would be students paying off all their education expenses by themselves. Despite the financial burden on students and parents, the advantage is that students would be more responsible and accountable for their performance. As they understand the difficulty, they will definitely ensure to put in their best to excel in their studies. For instance, a student who depends on parents or siblings for their fees will attend classes regularly as he would have to pay off the expenses to the family.
In the third and most effective option is to offer loan to support the studies. Students who graduates are most likely to get higher salary, this means they should be able to pay off the loan amount as installment back to the government. This in turn lets government to support the new undergraduates to make their way into universities. For example, in the southern state of India top performers attaining above 90% are allocated with state funded loan for their education purpose.
In summary, higher education is integral part of betterment of society. Any support to encourage the students to study further would be beneficial for a successful society. To support the students by loans, thereby giving them a chance to get better placements and thereby returning the loan amount is the best solution for both individuals as well as a country to prosper.
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... the best solution for both individuals as well as a country to prosper.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, third, well, for example, for instance, in summary, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15300546448 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84289190779 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48087431694 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6596601153 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.777777778 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238128470046 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884078931095 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587289444503 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148212306949 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509660059549 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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