You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord.

Essay topics:

You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord.

Dear Mr Baker,

I am writing this letter to you to request for an extension to pay the rent for my apartment.

As you are aware, I have been staying in apartment 13b since last five years and I have not defaulted any payment until now. But now my employer has made my position redundant due to which I have lost my job. The company states they are on the process of winding up the business.

I have found another job through a local interview and expected to start working from 25th of May. Due to my current financial crunch, I have requested my new employer for advance salary payment and they have agreed for the same.

Due to my current financial crisis, I request you for an extension of 2 weeks to pay my rent. Hope you would consider my humble request and shall not charge me with any penalty for late payment.

In hope of a positive reply from you.

yours sincerely,
John Smith

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Baker, I am writing this letter to you to reque...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
... hope of a positive reply from you. yours sincerely, John Smith
^^^^^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ive reply from you. yours sincerely, John Smith
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4578313253 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31149531615 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620481927711 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1471616165 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 4.34317383033 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1468929373 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692580746121 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624872394441 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877324634576 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059221219397 0.0580467560999 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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