If a product is sold and people buy it, then advertising is not necessary and can be considered a kind of entertainment.
Do you agree or disagree with this?
Sailing the product is the mail target for every business. Goods are introduced to consumers by advertising, and they show the new ability and feature of new products. Some people think that, for famous products do not need spend money for advertising, while others believe that advertising is the inseparable part of each business. This essay will shed some light on this argument from both sides, and extend my partial support to the latter view before arriving at conclusion.
Publicizing is playing a key role in business world, and it is the best way for introduce product to everyone. It is not have expired time until they company is alive. Big companies believe that, however they are well-known, they need intelligent commercial message for their fans for sailing more. However, advertising should produce and shows in society by billboards or on TV that they absorb new clients and keep their old consumers by showing new features on their new products. Furthermore, companies should spend large budget on advertising that they do not lose competition from their rivals. For instance, BMW or Mercedes Benz try to make announcement for showing their ability and performance in their new design, whereas these two brands are very famous and popular in the world and everybody knows them.
On the other hand, some people believe that, companies should not waste their money on advertising about well-known products. They can spend these funds on other things such as charity institution that on this way they can help to many people to have better life. Additionally, these budget do not have any effect on their sale. Individuals know product and buy it, so they can spend this money on new project to produce new product that have less wrong and more efficient.
At the conclusion, in my opinion, advertising is a safe investment for companies which are thinking about their progress and also their client satisfaction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[3]
Message: Did you mean 'to spend'?
Suggestion: to spend
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10031347962 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65789684536 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53605015674 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4308646011 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.466666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122426278524 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482107727849 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455630650631 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085624737804 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615069926671 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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