You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank’s head office.
- Explain why you are writing
- Express concern about the missing card
- Ask them what they intend to do
Dear Sir/Madam:
I am Amir Nazaripoor who your customer with identification number AN378 since 5 years ago. I am writing to inform you that, I received a letter from your branch last week which included acknowledge receipt of a new credit card whereas the envelope was empty. I mean that, the card was missing from the packet. Due to this problem I am writing to express concern about the missing card. I am not sure that this card was losing or any person stolen it. You know that it is my only account and all my money is on it. Owing to this issue, I ask you that keeping my account out of reach and change my password as soon as possible. Moreover, I need a new bank card to do my daily routine purchase.
Your prompt response would be highly appreciated.
Faithfully yours,
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, whereas, i mean, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 640.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 144.0 206.0 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44444444444 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49474756881 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673611111111 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7619164528 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1111111111 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352632867512 0.216113520407 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117797027967 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103749923111 0.0603063233224 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193817989181 0.12726935374 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16741540287 0.0580467560999 288% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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