You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank’s head office.
- Explain why you are writing
- Express concern about the missing card
- Ask them what they intend to do
Dear Sir/Madam:
I am Amir Nazaripoor who your customer with identification number AN378 since 5 years ago. I am writing to inform you that, I requested for a new credit card from your bank last month because my present card will be expired the end of July. Hence, I received a letter from your branch last week which included acknowledge receipt of a new credit card whereas the envelope was empty. I mean that, the card was missing from the packet. I went to bank and explain my problem with your stuff but they did not help me. Due to this problem I am writing to express concern about the missing card, in reality I am not sure that this card was losing or any person stolen it. You know that it is my only account and all my money is on it. Owing to this issue, I ask you that keeping my account out of reach and change my password as soon as possible. Moreover, I need a new bank card to do my daily routine purchase.
Your prompt response would be highly appreciated.
Faithfully yours,
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, whereas, i mean, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3422459893 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37098091856 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625668449198 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3439063177 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376914185061 0.216113520407 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12230681074 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908292029901 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205821604532 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179419018221 0.0580467560999 309% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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