Your office building doesn’t have parking available.
Write a letter to the manager. In your letter
- Explain the problem
- Suggest a solution
- Say why parking will benefit all employees
Dear sir,
I am writing to draw your attention to a perennial and bothersome problem all staff, including me, has been facing while trying to park our cars in the vicinity of the office’s building. as you fully aware, our office does not have any parking space of its own which puts both employers and employees in trouble. Like the other, I used to park in a nearby parking lot from my first day in the office, but recently, I have experienced of stealing my car’s belongs since the car park shut down by the municipal. Despite having correspondence with city mayor, they have not taken any serious measures either to re-open the old parking or to establish the new one.
After negotiation, I, as staff’s spokesperson, decide to let you know about current condition and our request, I would like to suggest that the office can rent that space as it is currently recant, not only wanted it benefit staff, but also your favor can boost team spirit and fuel our sense of appreciation of company. When people who are working here, understand what you have done, the work’s efficiency surely will be doubled.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 193, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...vicinity of the office's building. as you fully aware, our office does not ha...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'recanted'.
Suggestion: recanted
... can rent that space as it is currently recant, not only wanted it benefit staff, but ...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'benefits'?
Suggestion: benefits
...is currently recant, not only wanted it benefit staff, but also your favor can boost te...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78974358974 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6963144788 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707692307692 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 16.3608247423 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.5447060775 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.666666667 76.5299724578 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 32.5 16.8248392259 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254561589764 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113980675908 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366729533981 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180088558354 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672583141657 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 8.37731958763 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 7.45979381443 196% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 8.54432989691 173% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.