Your office building doesn’t have parking available.
Write a letter to the manager. In your letter
- Explain the problem
- Suggest a solution
- Say why parking will benefit all employees
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to say my concern about car park. We have a lot of problems when we come to company with our cars, because of the lack of parking space we have to park our cars along a street or anywhere far from the main building. Cars are fined by police or stolen by theft every day, and due to this problem, we do not have enough concentration during the work time. The next problem is about time, in winter we should put or cars in some covering parking located in street no15, hence we should walk to office, so we arrive here with 15-minute delay every day.
I investigated around the company and found a big land next to our office. I think you can have a negotiation with landlord about hiring his land. It is obvious that having parking near the main building has enormous advantages for the company. The first one is about your staff’s convenience. If they have a relief, they can have high performance during the work, I mean that their efficiency will be increased. The next one is about getting to work on time. Staff start their work without delay, so they can work more time and it is good for company.
Your prompt response would be highly appreciated.
Faithfully yours,
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, i mean, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52252252252 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42303824931 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5440226422 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171933869047 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599355134559 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523068058165 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104596823718 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248993647834 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.