People sleep less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less? What effect does it have on an individually and society?
Sleeping is one of the health columns, and insomnia means facing with danger. Unfortunately, in modern society individuals sleep less than before. In my opinion, it has several reason such as stress, depression, emotional problems and even bad diet for dinner. Because of these and many others factors, people cannot have well sleep during a night, and also they will have a lot of problems during a day. This essay will shed some light on this argument from both sides and extend my partial support to the former view before arriving at conclusion.
The first is why do people sleep less, and also whether insomnia has any effect on people relationship in society with others or not? Scientist believe that using a lot mobile phone and also watching more TV before sleeping at night is a main reason of sleeping less; Because the light of these kind of things do not let people to have well sleep. Their recommendation always is, do not bring your cellphone to the bed at night when you want to sleep. Moreover, some individuals are sick and they not able to sleep; on the pother word, they suffer from insomnia. Researches show that 10% of population are in pain from this ill in the world and for solving these problems doctors offer pills but these pills are very habit-forming and do not should use more. Patients need to eat pills if they want to sleep. Furthermore, in these days, some people need to work full time, or even more than one shift, so in fact they cannot find enough time for sleeping.
On the other hand, it is obvious that sleeping less has a lot of reason on people’s reaction and ability. According to sociologists’ opinion, when some persons cannot have enough sleep at night, their ability will decrease and even their concentration will not be stable, because of that, in society they have big problems with others and they always are nervous, otherwise they may not have any control on their behavior, so the rate of harshness between citizens will go up. The next negative point of sleeping less goes back to people’s efficiency. For instance, when people cannot have well sleep, their ability at work will reduce and the number of their mistake is increasing during the work.
At the conclusion, doctors believe that, sleeping short at night cause enormous diseases such as blood pressure, obesity, heart diseases, diabetes and many others. In their opinion, each human should go to sleep before 23:00 and should have minimum 7 hours sleep during a night.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...less than before. In my opinion, it has several reason such as stress, depression, emotional p...
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Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'slept'.
Suggestion: slept
...others factors, people cannot have well sleep during a night, and also they will have...
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Line 4, column 145, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...n society with others or not? Scientist believe that using a lot mobile phone and also ...
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Message: The proper name in singular (Scientist) must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...n society with others or not? Scientist believe that using a lot mobile phone and also ...
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Line 4, column 290, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... of sleeping less; Because the light of these kind of things do not let people to have wel...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'slept'.
Suggestion: slept
...f things do not let people to have well sleep. Their recommendation always is, do not...
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is always
...o have well sleep. Their recommendation always is, do not bring your cellphone to the bed...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...in these days, some people need to work full time, or even more than one shift, so in fac...
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are always
... have big problems with others and they always are nervous, otherwise they may not have an...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'slept'.
Suggestion: slept
... instance, when people cannot have well sleep, their ability at work will reduce and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, in fact, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85813953488 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51587603702 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.6707939046 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.055555556 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368881964927 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140510372106 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113302810814 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234792891369 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663201382311 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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