Your child is going on a three-day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go.
Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter:
- Say why you would like to go on the trip
- Suggest what you could do to help during the trip
- Ask other questions about the trip
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am the father of Roxana and my name is Amir. Today I received your invitation for next month trip to Canada. I am so happy that you chose my daughter for this excursion trip. I am writing this letter to say my readiness, and you can count on my help during this trip.
My daughter is only child and also she is dependent on me and her mother. Traveling without parents is unbelievable for Roxana. Hence, I decided to join this trip with you. Moreover, my cooperation can have a few advantages for your team. To begin with, you know that I work as a chef in a famous restaurant, so if I come with you, I can cook delicious traditional foods. Not only are house-made foods good for children health, but also they are more nutritional. Than fast foods or outdoor foods. The foods, which cooked by me, are prepared by fresh ingredients.
At the end, I wondered to know about children accommodation in Canada and even their means of transportation. If you have some question, please do not hesitate, you can contact me by 9876543210 or send me email on Email@gmail.com
Your prompt response would be highly appreciated.
Faithfully yours,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 464, Rule ID: SENT_START_THEM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Then'?
Suggestion: Then
...th, but also they are more nutritional. Than fast foods or outdoor foods. The foods,...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, you know, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65853658537 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86543743734 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648780487805 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.535168694 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.2142857143 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6428571429 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153404331289 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474145148668 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487768221058 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093834546039 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030040138899 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.