You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing, express concern a

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You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing, express concern about the missing card, ask them what they intend to do

Respected Sir / Madam,

This is with reference to the letter send by your bank to me to acknowledge receipt of a new card, but I am regretful to inform you that I have not received it. I have had many accounts in other banks, but I have never gone through the pain of misplacing a card from the bank or other authorities. This pushed me to find some time out of my busy schedule and write this letter to you. These makes me worried about the undisciplined in the delivery of the card. These days, misuse of credit cards is a major phenomenon. If someone receives the card and do not update the bank about it then it will create more serious issues. Furthermore, it will my issuance of the new card which I am afraid can create a big lose for me.

In such a situation, I would like to know what are your plans to help me overcome it. Along with that, Do you intend to help me apply for a new card and also what about blocking of the card that is undelivered for so long? I am waiting to hear back from your officials on this issue. Please do the needful.

Thanking you,
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Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, i am afraid, with reference to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19711538462 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37255933472 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586538461538 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.574909793 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.75 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335707979112 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112861414451 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886827717565 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159895102983 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138891610878 0.0580467560999 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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