If racism and xenophobia are attitude that we are taught, not born with, then the problems that come from them can be resolved.Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Over the decades, racism and xenophobia around the world begot seismic shift on peoples' mindset. Alongside the changing needs of modern society, the sociological discoveries have casted light on how the issues that are derived from racism can be resolved as these are built by human. This essay will use practical examples to explore that how such problems are resolved in human history.
To begin with, discrimination on basis of race and culture is intuitively perceived as man made problems and can be solved by giving rights to them to communicate and forward their agenda. Take Canada for instance, in fact, Canada is multicultural country; where people in entire parliament are pertain to different culture, religion and race. Instead, it has been consecutively marked by UNO as world's number one country to live in because of peace. Seen in this light, it is broadly believed that issues related to racism can be solved.
Another insight that must not be neglected, meanwhile, resentments related to races are forwarded from one generation to next. Indeed, implementation of core values such are trust, respect and courage can solve much of the issue. For example, India and Pakistani are rivals since their inception in 1947 which has been brought forward by ancestor but a recent example of President Imran Khan break the ice and invited various people from India in his oath ceremony. This is purely an act of kindness. Consistent with this line of thinking, it is strongly agreed that problems arising from racism and xenophobia are issues with key.
To conclude, there are ample evidences suggesting that problems created by man, more specifically issues pertain to racism are issues with solutions. It is predicted that if problems related racism and xenophobia are resolved, world would become a better place to live in foreseeable future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16887417219 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68177783781 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605960264901 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4682201793 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252377675385 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829452956564 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641221746133 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149026187643 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00932918418979 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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