Nowadays Many undeveloped countries face series problems, trying to produce decent education and health facilities as well as other areas like commerce for their citizens. However, I disagree that developed countries ought to aid these countries, and think they should try to resolve their issues themselves.
Firstly, it is usually possible for poor country to raise enough money to overcome their predicaments since the source of their short comings based on mismanagement and deep corruption which have resulted in their fund is being embezzled by dishonest official and affairs in areas like education, health and trade. otherwise , if they need to support in such areas, they should first try to eradicate the above-mentioned issues before asking for aid from other nations.
Furthermore, the money that the government have belongs to their citizens because it originate from their taxes, national resources. It should spend for providing better facilities like heath center and education system, and improving business environments for their citizens not for people in other countries.
In the other hand, some people argue that the low level of life in poor countries due to migrate their citizens to developed countries, finding better life. These factors leading to exist serious problems like cultural and financial concerns for rich nations. However, public investment in improving borer control and defense structure can be barrier for these concerns.
In conclusion, I think developed nations should not support the underdeveloped countries, as their fund should be spend in better ways for their owns citizens. Undeveloped countries can overcome their short comes in trade, education and health with correct planning, improving management and eliminate corrupt affairs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Otherwise
...areas like education, health and trade. otherwise , if they need to support in such areas...
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Suggestion: ,
...e education, health and trade. otherwise , if they need to support in such areas, ...
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Message: Did you mean 'originates'?
Suggestion: originates
...ve belongs to their citizens because it originate from their taxes, national resources. I...
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Suggestion:
...rich nations. However, public investment in improving borer control and defense s...
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Message: Did you mean 'spent'?
Suggestion: spent
...oped countries, as their fund should be spend in better ways for their owns citizens....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, well, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64814814815 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74667668019 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57037037037 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3418725946 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.636363636 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206045372467 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089777977021 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409356136639 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130618688947 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305842690895 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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