The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be cause of social and medical problems. What forms these problems take? Do the advantages of mobile phone use outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays growing use of mobile has changed our lifestyle. We have become dependent on mobile phone for communication and doing business. Excessive usage of mobile phone has created issues like less communal gatherings and poor health condition. However, despite these problems it has plenty of benefits which undermine its negative effects.
Increased use of phone for communication and business purpose has effects on social life and health condition. People now prefer to connect to their loved ones through mobile instead of meeting face to face. This has reduced communal get together which leads people to isolation. In addition to this, mobile phones have a lot of entertainment options that people are no longer interested in playing outdoor games. As a result, they counter health issues, such as obesity.
However, mobile phone has gained an important place in our everyday life that its significance cannot be denied. People communicate with others day-to-day through it, and it is one of the fast and convenient mediums to communicate. In business community, mobile phone has a key role as it helps businessmen to stay updated with their employees and client even during holidays. This ease of connectivity has helped them to do better in business. Furthermore, people can use plenty of mobile applications, such as find places and track their destinations. They can also work at home and stay in touch with their employer. This convenience is unmatchable.
To conclude, those people who use mobile phone excessively, they often face difficulties of poor social life and health condition. Otherwise mobile phone has made people's life easier and more convenient since they are at liberty to communicate with others. Therefore, I believe that its benefits are far more significant than its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33797909408 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86721264496 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578397212544 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6672217156 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6315789474 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1052631579 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21052631579 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337550950367 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104291856255 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087855517004 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226424546613 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638596459513 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.1 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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