An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with situation?
There is no doubt that the immigration rate is mounting every year. Mainly people from developing countries migrate to developed countries in search of better life and facilities. However, this trend is causing a negative impact on the developing nation’s economy. In this essay, I will discuss the problems associated with the migration and measures to be taken to reduce this these figures.
The adverse impact of the rise of immigration of skilled workers from developing to developed country will be on healthcare and education facilities in rural areas because most people in live under poverty line, have short supply of medicines, and inadequate educational techniques or dependency on traditional teaching methods. Therefore, the young children rely on teachers to raise their knowledge and skills about subjects, for example, science, maths, and so on. Whereas health care providers are concerned they either plan to work for big reputed hospitals or move abroad, then villagers will have to reach out to public hospitals where, the appointment waiting list will be long as the number of patients per doctor would be is high.
Firstly, the government along with charitable organisations should build hospitals and schools from the money generated by taxing people income. Secondly, developed countries and multi-national companies should come forward and invest in long term projects which will give the opportunity to both skilled and non-skilled workers to earn good remuneration in the their homeland, thus, improving their quality of life. Last but not least, government should ensure that public service workers are rewarded as per their qualifications and ability with benefits, such as free education and medical care facilities, which will improve the satisfaction level.
To conclude I would like to say that migration of talented individuals will severely impact education and healthcare facilities of people who cannot afford to pay big significant amounts for these services. For that reason, governments of both developing and developed nation should invest in the economy to generate more rewarding jobs.
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...who cannot afford to pay big significant amounts for these services. For that rea...
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...onomy to generate more rewarding jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54268292683 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86164065005 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606707317073 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.8138024126 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.5 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131665298775 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514596561415 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03538797081 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826090279703 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457852576836 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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