An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems do this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?
The number of professionals like doctors and teachers, nowadays, are migrating from there own poorer countries to the developed ones. Owing to this, various problems are being faced by underdeveloped countries, and several steps should be taken to prevent this in future.
Professionals, in the various fields, are the assets of a country. However, the desire to extract the most out of their talents, people working in the concerned areas urge to fledge their wings and tend to get settled in other countries. Because of this, these core talents fuel up the economy of the countries they have migrated to, resulting in creating the economic gap among the nations. It not only makes the local people suffer, due to the deficiency of the supreme class education as well as health services but also cripples the economic structure of the nation. For instance, due to lack of dexterous doctors in government hospitals in my area, people have to pay a considerable amount in the private ones.
To overcome this situation, firstly, the regimes of the nation will have to respect these professions. If these people will get a reasonable sum of money in their own countries, then they will never be lured by the other ones. Besides, famous celebrities and politicians should take their education and health services in their own country instead of crossing the boundaries. It will generate faith in the people regarding the quality services in their nation. According to a survey by Forbes, 90% of famous people like to attain their education and health treatments from developed countries. Imitating these people, the professionals are heading towards the other countries.
To conclude, the increasing problems regarding the migration of the professionals, such as shortage of elite education and medical facilities in their native country, should be dealt with proper guidance and government should respect the hard work behind these professional’s degrees.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'their own'?
Suggestion: their own
... teachers, nowadays, are migrating from there own poorer countries to the developed ones....
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Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...l steps should be taken to prevent this in future. Professionals, in the various field...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fledging'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'urge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: fledging
...ple working in the concerned areas urge to fledge their wings and tend to get settled in ...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
...er be lured by the other ones. Besides, famous celebrities and politicians should take their educa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, so, then, well, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29073482428 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89212741489 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533546325879 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5079682971 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.285714286 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217419103655 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731968218652 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523307903037 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14471454303 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606187319383 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.