Increasing numbers of students are going to university instead of working after high school.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who do this.
Going to university for higher education after high school is becoming increasingly popular. Many students are now inclined to join university immediately after they finish the high school instead of working. This essay will discuss the benefits as well as drawbacks of this ongoing trend.
Planning higher studies after high school has many benefits. Applying immediately for university courses, after school, keep students focused and more study oriented than those who start working after school and then resume their studies later. Recent studies conducted by University has shown that students who register for university courses after school has higher chances of good academic scores. Joining a course and finishing it with good grades open doors to opportunities. Students get good salary jobs in their respective domain at early stage of life compare to others and lead a direct path to success. The article published by Newsdaily has proved that people who has finished their studies in early ages and started working has higher success rates. Therefore, completing studies early has many benefits.
This ongoing trend also has some disadvantages. Firstly, people will not have local working experience which is very important to understand the job market. If you know how things are being managed in the market, you will get one step closer to the success. According to a paper published last week, students who work and gain local experience first are more successful in jobs like marketing and sales which requires knowledge of culture and market. Secondly, work experience gives a new point of view to see the world. One can truly understand their interests which helps to decide the field of study. For example, if you will work in sales team first before actually pursuing degree in sales, you will have a better idea that are you content with sales job or not. Hence, working before choosing the field of study has its own benefits.
This essay discussed advantages as well as drawbacks of pursuing a university course immediately after school over working after school. In fact, students should consider both sides and choose widely.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in fact, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23342939481 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48920632501 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541786743516 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2162874389 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.35 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352414017061 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103347252399 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102901881957 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247623617054 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107508043336 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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