with an increasing population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past.
to what extent do you agree?
Two days age, I read an article about the influence the Internet has on social communication. One internet experts claimed that traditional methods of interaction in communities will become outdated and be replaced by virtual world. This essay agrees with this idea for the following reasons.
The first reason is that people have learned to express their thoughts and feelings online. Many social networks have added many functions, including emojis, by which people not only can convey their thoughts, but emotional state. For example, on the Facebook, people send messages to each other with emojis that are available in a wide range, so, by means of emojis, people do not have to meet up with the opponent to show how happy or angry they feel.
Another reason why traditional communication vanishes due to the popularity of online and text messaging is that through the web people find it easier to speak about serious matters than through traditional conversation. Many people are reluctant to speak about disappointing things because they are afraid of the reaction to their words. However, with the help of the Internet, they can bravely say what they think with no fear of consequences.
However, some social workers believe that physical interaction in society will always be real. The main argument is that people need to communicate if they want to be successful in life. To be a good business person, one has to learn how to work with employees, which cannot be achieved by means of online communication. Further, to have a good time with friends, one needs to meet with them and find common topics to talk about. Despite this, the number of people, who totally lead a virtual life online, is growing in the course of modern technology developing to give them more opportunities to work and make friends online. For example, in Japan, many young people have chosen to live isolated from society and given preference to the virtual world because they find it more comfortable.
In conclusion, face-to-face communication will be obsolete since modern technology is growing in functionality, giving people the opportunity to express themselves fully, build friendly relationships and pursue a career.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15512465374 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79867789673 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567867036011 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.99004192 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.3125 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161282419822 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504093785007 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434865481784 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988240971475 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484054891331 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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