International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?
It is irrefutable to say that international tourism has a great impact on the economy of many nations and has an impact on the local people and the atmosphere as well. From my understanding, the advantages of the former outweigh the disadvantages of the later.
Let's have a glance on its noticeable merits. tourism is the most leisure activity and helps people in broadening their horizons and open mind by exposing them to different culture and customs. The economic boom in the travel industry is quite visible now a day. people do travel to rejuvenate themselves from their monotonous lives. there are so many bloggers who travel to different places around the year, do blogging and earn money from their blogs. Moreover, it has created job opportunities for people. For instance, countries like Thailand, Indonesia, Egypt, their economies are dependent on tourism. However, the stated countries do not produce anything of their own to run their economy but because of their beautiful landscapes, panoramic views and lovely beaches, international tourism is alive.
Now, shifting focus to the other side of the coin, international tourism has few drawbacks as well. Firstly, it has been reported that the amount of garbage tourists produce has increased from the last few years. it can have a catastrophic effect on our planet. Secondly, there could be an increase in the prices of local goods due to an increase in demand which can directly affect the local population. Lastly, there could be a threat of terror attack as well.
To recapitulate, despite a few negative effects, I strongly believe that the benefits of global tourism would bring more benefits to the local inhabitants and communities as it can boost the economic condition of the nation. As far as negative effects are concerned, the government can regulate strict laws and implement them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10819672131 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83803778673 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.216414432 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6470588235 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227265677002 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598031215733 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653983863861 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143836399349 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803428398679 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.