International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment.
Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
<p><span style="font-weight: 400;">There is no doubt that international tourists have brought a lot of positive impact on many countries.
However, these benefits also come with many negative issues. Personally, I feel that international tourism has resulted in more advantages than disadvantages to the affected nations in general. In this essay, I will examine both the benefits and their related cost and support my opinion accordingly.</span></p><p><span style="font-weight: 400;">First of all, many people argue that many local inhabitants have been sacrificed in order to make way for the development of tourist attractions. For examples, trees were cut down so that hotels can be constructed; old heritage sites were demolished and replaced by new shopping malls; local residents, especially the aboriginals, have to be relocated so that their land can be used for a new airport. However, people tend to ignore the economic and social benefits brought upon by these developments.
For example, the number of jobs created by the constructions of hotels and shopping malls could stimulate the economic growth of a nation and benefit both the people and the nation as a whole. </span></p><p><span style="font-weight: 400;">Secondly, many people also claimed that the influx of foreign tourists will increase social problems such as crime rates immoral activities. For examples, they claimed that tourists usually like to visit pubs and clubs in the evening and that will lead to a higher rate of alcohol-related problems such as noise pollution, vandalism, and prostitution. However, I believe that the millions of foreign dollars brought in by these tourists could actually decrease the problems if the money is put into proper used by the government. For example, the tax collected from the entertainment outlet could be used to help combat crime and actually, make the country a safer place.</span></p><p><span style="font-weight: 400;">In conclusion, I believe that if we look at the overall picture of international tourism when doing the cost-benefit analysis, we will see that they are more advantages than disadvantages. <br></span></p>
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in general, no doubt, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79692307692 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.46970075643 2.80592935109 159% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.7379837052 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.272727273 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5454545455 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1818181818 7.06120827912 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16414381532 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697653227983 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506715519798 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12445443414 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312960380072 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.95 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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