Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save
money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
1-give details of how you and your friend or family use the center
2-explain why the center is important for the local community
3-describe the possible effects on local people if the center closes
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to the proposed closure of the town’s sports and leisure center.
First, I would like to stress how important the center is for my own family. My wife and I both use the gym on a daily basis, and our two children attend weekly gymnastics and football clubs, which they enjoy immensely.
I also believe that the leisure center is an integral part of the local community. It is where people go to do exercise, play sports, take part in-group activities, and to socialize and make friends. It really is a social hub in the town.
If you do close the sports and leisure center, the local residents will lose a treasured facility. As there are no other sports centers within a reasonable distance, the closure would have a detrimental effect on health and quality of life in the area.
I hope that you will consider these concerns before making a decision.
Yours faithfully,
Paul Jones
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...all clubs, which they enjoy immensely. I also believe that the leisure center i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ese concerns before making a decision. Yours faithfully, Paul Jones
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, really, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7696969697 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54078937576 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690909090909 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.783501647 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237526142608 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837651180254 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688042834876 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101565178553 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492928001431 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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