Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save
money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
1-give details of how you and your friend or family use the center
2-explain why the center is important for the local community
3-describe the possible effects on local people if the center closes
Dear sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to rumors spreading in our local community about closing sports and leisure center that is located in the north side of our neighborhood, because of a previous decision to allocate money for more important services.
Firstly, I would like to explain to you that this facility is the one of its kind, which offer a wide variety of activity that does not exist anywhere else. For example, it has video games, play station and PC games alongside with manual games and long track me and my grandfather we always do jogging there. Another fact is that this center attract all youngsters, so it helped to keep them away from the path of crime and drugs.
However, if you insist on closing it, that will lead to unhappy feelings and depression to our community. They might refuse to elect your staff in the next elections.
Looking forward to hear from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Mohamed Atef
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lect your staff in the next elections. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours...
^^^
Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...the next elections. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours Faithfully, Mohamed A...
^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...om you. Yours Faithfully, Mohamed Atef
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, so, for example, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78527607362 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42234196594 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.748466257669 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.5383419922 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 4.34317383033 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165803566477 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635482182456 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435993078522 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076492939176 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387544958442 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.