Internet and television are giving more opportunities for the average person to become popular. Is this the positive and negative impact?
Modern life is almost impossible without internet and television that resulting in showing off normal person as celebrities. As far as I am concerned, I think it is two sided coin where it is individual's responsibility to prefer the side they needed and the following essay will discuss in detail about it.
There are several advantages, in which two of the main aspects are communication and cultural development. Due to the development in satellite technology, it became easier to know about international events and cultural oriented aspects from our home via television. Moreover, internet became cheap to afford it and thus it can be utilized to improve our skills in varies ways. Let's say that, at present Youtube provides many facilities to see something that is necessary for studies, short clipping of movies for time pass and also to make out money from creating videos that will explains the business products or any other informations related to varieties of topics. To elucidate, accessing to internet should be useful and not to get fame.
On the other hand, there are some adverse effects of continuous usage of internet and television which results in addiction, physical and mental stress as well as personal safety issues. For instance, some applications like Tik Tok should be accessed by considering the personal safety and principle where most people's became addicted in recent times which resulted in woe. To add-on, one survey from mass media students specified that continuous watching television makes human beings to become lazy and it is one of the main cause for mental stress. Indeed, it is known reason that the eyes will get affected too.
Based on my perspective, normal person can be portrayed as celebrity in internet but plausible effects is not known to others, which should also be taken into consideration while accessing internet and what to see in television.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Let's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for instance, i think, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1575562701 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81127150682 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604501607717 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.0601014025 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.666666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139414593907 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489920575112 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419950324353 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833836148484 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253415848301 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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