The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.
What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?
The internet has totally changed the way information is distributed and used, however it has also forged issues that did not prevail earlier. Leakage of confidential data and a considerable increase in the cybercrime rate through hacking are the two main concerns associated with the internet. I will discuss these problems in detail and suggest suitable measures in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, people these days are using social network for not just communicating with their friends and acquaintances but also to share their personal lives by uploading their videos and photographs. This could pose a major threat to their confidentiality as anyone can misuse their data. For instance, as per the latest report of wiki leaks, eighty percent of the information uploaded by the users of social networking sites is under threat and can be misused. Another issue is the increase in the number of hacking activities across the world which is considered to be the biggest threat to the online data. To illustrate, according to the World Bank report, sixty percent of the banking data was hacked by the hackers in the US in 2018 and this could have resulted in the loss of billions of dollars.
Turning to the possible solutions, people can restrict their connections on social networking sites in order to eliminate the threat of their data breach. Moreover, companies such as Facebook, Instagram and Snapchat should eliminate the suspicious user accounts which failed to verify their identity. This approach could aid in removing threat to the confidentiality of the data. Another remedy to curb the problem is to create anti-hacking squads within the organizations. For example, Twitter has initiated the process of anti-hacking strategies which are followed to protect the consumer's data.
To conclude, breach of personal data and rise in the hacking incidents are the prime concerns associated with the use of the internet. However, they can be addressed by creating cyber security awareness among people and enacting strict anti-hacking laws.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'consumers'' or 'consumer's'?
Suggestion: consumers'; consumer's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, as to, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32522796353 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86977740621 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55623100304 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3788705463 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.8 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143558111427 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520433464434 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524239134811 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10886500096 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770555835322 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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