Nowadays, advancement of technology is playing a very vital role in our life in the form of internet, television as well as media also. Due to all medium of channels they are directly involves in our life and we have totally dependented on it.
According to my opines, I think that disadvantages of internet are outweighed rather than advantages. Furthermore, I will explain it.
At begin with, the internet is a vast source of medium you can find out any sort of information with in a few second as compare to other source of medium. Eventually just because of internet you can expand your business as well as you can also improve your socail networking, connect with people, collect plethora amount of data, facts and figures to any topic. For instances, according to UK research internet speed 70% higher than other source of medium it gives you quick result.
On the second hand, internet has created huge amount of negative impact in our daily basis life. In Pakistan during the research it has proved that 60% of information is fake on internet rather than other source of medium.Inspite of, due to socail media everyone try to create negativity among the people just because of fake news, lack of information, corruption, cyber hacking etc. If i talk about banking industry so most of the people id password has hacked just because of misuse of internet.
I strongly believe that, the corrputed mind people do this kind of activity just because of money. Even they thread people, they kill people etc. So, day by day the corruption rate is increasing just because of misuse of internet.
I put in it nutshell, I pen down saying that, government take the responsibility and try to impose some limitation on internet in serious note and provide some safety precautions to people as well as internet users.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...f internet, television as well as media also. Due to all medium of channels they are...
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Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun second seems to be countable; consider using: 'few seconds'.
Suggestion: few seconds
...d out any sort of information with in a few second as compare to other source of medium. E...
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Line 6, column 223, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Inspite
...rnet rather than other source of medium.Inspite of, due to socail media everyone try to...
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Line 6, column 388, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...tion, corruption, cyber hacking etc. If i talk about banking industry so most of ...
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Line 8, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ted mind people do this kind of activity just because of money. Even they thread ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, second, so, well, for instance, i think, kind of, sort of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86495176849 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7126145936 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569131832797 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8650831904 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.071428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195397588573 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626760672649 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518355435364 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875987998685 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550877976665 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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