Dear Mr. Jack,
My name is Zara nooe, I m an export manager in your comany SA international in Dubai. I am writing this letter because I would like to spend six months for Pakistan head office. There are many reason.
Firstly , my marriage has fixed in couple of month ago. However, my family live in Pakistan. They have celebrated my wedding in Karachi city with my relatives. Even my in-laws are also live in karachi. That's why I want to move karachi head office atleast for six months.
On the other hand, I have completed my four years in Dubai head office. Now, I want to explore my skills in Pakistan. Even, I hope this decision will help me best possible result and enhance my ability and I will perform my responsibility effectively.
I hope you can understand my values and try to support me. If you have any query regarding this letter.You can contact me my personal number 003456788999.
Yours sincerely,
Zara nooe.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...ths for Pakistan head office. There are many reason. Firstly , my marriage has fixed in ...
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Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ffice. There are many reason. Firstly , my marriage has fixed in couple of mont...
^^
Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...en my in-laws are also live in karachi. Thats why I want to move karachi head office ...
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Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'me the best'.
Suggestion: me the best
...n. Even, I hope this decision will help me best possible result and enhance my ability ...
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Line 9, column 60, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rstand my values and try to support me. If you have any query regarding this lette...
^^
Line 9, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: You
...ou have any query regarding this letter.You can contact me my personal number 00345...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71515151515 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63549913906 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69696969697 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3240996636 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.5714285714 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7857142857 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180785416478 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667835785531 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829542090984 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116718605889 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832359700734 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.