It is irrefutable that majority of people love to learn art and music nowadays. Even children has adopted it as a professional which mean that it has been proverbial in modern society. I agreed that students should take the active part to improve art skills and music at school with balance position.
At begin with, why today modern societies are highly recommended art and music? there are several reasons. Firstly, right now music and art are the hot potatoes all over the world and majority of youngster take it as a career because it is a good way to earn handsome source of income. Secondly, by professional it is the most valuable position rather than other professional just like doctor engineer, banker etc. people love them. Even they become more famous at international market and everyone know them by name by personality etc. Moreover, balance diet, healthy life style is help out to getting fit. However, they are more conscious about their health and in take many safety precautions in the form of fruits, exercise and proper diet.
On the other hand, I instead to agreed that balance position in any kind of work is most significant. So, I would like to suggest here student should concentrate all subjects because they are also necessary to increase the knowledge regarding many field and solely art and music will not give them. All academic course is helpful to enhanced personality development and sense of thinking in better way.
To put it in nutshell, I pen down saying that music and art is a creativity which means that we are able to do more effective work in our life. I personally believe that we should provide these opportunity to youngster and build their confidence in positive manners.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: There
...s are highly recommended art and music? there are several reasons. Firstly, right now...
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Suggestion: People
... just like doctor engineer, banker etc. people love them. Even they become more famous...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... suggest here student should concentrate all subjects because they are also neces...
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Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun field seems to be countable; consider using: 'many fields'.
Suggestion: many fields
...ary to increase the knowledge regarding many field and solely art and music will not give ...
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Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this opportunity' or 'these opportunities'?
Suggestion: this opportunity; these opportunities
...rsonally believe that we should provide these opportunity to youngster and build their confidence...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87755102041 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61612169807 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8771712701 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.625 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304669079854 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879939599645 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952213427643 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188388418937 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654459119785 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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