Sharing information with team or group is the best way for learning. I personally believe that, most of the people are follow same pattern nowadays, because today era is more advance and if you share any kind of data regarding education or business it is a good cause of help. On the other hand, some data and information have security issue and most of the people do not like to share their personal detail to everyone. according to the base of this statement, i put my both views.
At begin with, why people do not like share their information to anyone? there are various segment. Firstly most of the organization is maintaining people record in the form of address, contact details, business transaction and so on. Even they do not like that, any one know about their details so, organization has responsibility to safe their data in to safer hand. For example, bank is an institution who provide basic security to their customer in the form of account, locker and many more. On the other hand, few people have introverted personality they are not liking to share any information to anyone because they have thought people know each and every thing regarding any kind of thing they do not required any kind of suggestion.
On the other hand, I believe that, sharing is the best form of communication, learning and developing trust. Even i would like to mention here, Whenever if, I find out any kind of information regarding my field or any other stuff I call to my teacher instead my mentor they resolve my query in very effective manner. Furthermore, they share with me their personal example. Even i would learn a lot just because of them. Another example i would like to share with you, today people love to help and You Tube is the best example of it. there are lot of people prompt youth and provide free education in different kind of website and it is completely free of cost. So, according to my point view, Sharing information is the healthy competition nowadays and everyone has tried to help others.
I put in it nutshell, I pen down saying that, information is the best way of learning and we should try to help other because it is a cause ofv self satisfaction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'followed'.
Suggestion: followed
...ly believe that, most of the people are follow same pattern nowadays, because today er...
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Suggestion: According
...hare their personal detail to everyone. according to the base of this statement, i put my...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ccording to the base of this statement, i put my both views. At begin with, wh...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...like share their information to anyone? there are various segment. Firstly most of th...
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Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'segments'?
Suggestion: segments
...nformation to anyone? there are various segment. Firstly most of the organization is ma...
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Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
... and so on. Even they do not like that, any one know about their details so, organizati...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...eople have introverted personality they are not liking to share any information to anyone beca...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...on, learning and developing trust. Even i would like to mention here, Whenever if...
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Suggestion:
...on regarding my field or any other stuff I call to my teacher instead my mentor t...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...re with me their personal example. Even i would learn a lot just because of them....
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...t just because of them. Another example i would like to share with you, today peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, regarding, so, for example, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65633074935 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63188157147 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472868217054 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1836173964 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.111111111 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197680848002 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686560096332 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568044139913 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131987395091 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669656200917 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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