Helping others, is the best part of satisfaction. Whether it is direct way or indirect way both are right. In my opinion, In this essay, I will discuss both point with the help of people preference regarding charity.
To began with, some people beleive that charity should be start in your house. So, they direct help to those people who are really close to them just like neighbours, relatives as well as clark staff. They thinks that, It is quite easy way to satisfy needy people. They help them because they are not financially strong, they have low income. Even they cannot fulfill their basic requirements in the form of education, food as far as concerned, they have seriously medical issues as well.
Secondly, Other people, doesnot want to show his self in front of people because they don't like this kind of behaviour. So, they join international charity organization and help out those people who are facing such a big disasters in the form of Earthquake, Sonami and fighting with Cancer diseases etc. They dispose-off huge amount of money in the charity institute. However, they want that, they can help exceed amount of people. For instances, Lady Diana, Imran khan is the best example of it.
Furthermore, I beleive that, not only money we can play active role to development of human growth. We can provide them postivity, sense of humor, right part of direction and try to learn them basic norms about education and social life. It is also foremost part of charity.
I put it in nutshell, I pen down saying that, both are true way of help. We always try to do support others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'started'?
Suggestion: started
...e people beleive that charity should be start in your house. So, they direct help to ...
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
... relatives as well as clark staff. They thinks that, It is quite easy way to satisfy n...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...is self in front of people because they dont like this kind of behaviour. So, they j...
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Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'disaster'?
Suggestion: disaster
... those people who are facing such a big disasters in the form of Earthquake, Sonami and f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, kind of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76618705036 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46952597946 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60071942446 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 5.43587174349 313% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6235760347 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6111111111 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4444444444 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162079341936 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498721499931 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493760505599 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944980157796 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542732195614 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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