Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of all societies. Do you think art and music still have a place in today’s modern world of technology? Should children spend more time learning art and music at school?
It is true that music and art are a vital part of human life. I believe that in our modern world it has a significant place as they give soul into our life that has become mechanically by advances in technology. Because of the positive impact of art and music on sprit and mind, children should be taught at young age.
Art and music are present in all aspects of human life and culture. Actually, they play a major role in our lives which have connected us to the past and form part of culture identity. In addition, music and generally any kind of art are universal language. They would transmit the concept and feeling in a way that words alone can not. Also, they would bring diverse groups of people all over the world together, regardless nation and religion which would lead to spreading messages of peace, unity and awareness. Furthermore, the society today regards music as a source of entertainment and purely for relaxation which assist people to run off from the tension of daily life.
There are several reasons that authorities should be dedicated more time in school curriculum for teaching art and music. Firstly, every society consists of a variety of professions. We can not replace a profession with different one. For example, while we need engineers to build devices, we also need musicians and entertainer so that people can enjoy their spare time. Secondary, art and especially music are very motivational and spend more time at school would help children focus on other complex subjects like physics or mathematics. Finally, many students have a natural talent for music and art and the teachers would be able to identify them.
In conclusion, arts are a necessary part of human existence. If we spent more time for teaching music in schools as much as other subjects, we would have a happier and more successful society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82075471698 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59517806158 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578616352201 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9117541337 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1764705882 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361945789701 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120402197306 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987284701744 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227672233399 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406599949134 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.