it has been said that the world is becoming a global village in which there are no boundaries to trade and communication. do the benefits of globalization outweigh the drawbacks?
It is true that, globalization ties the world together which allows to trade and communications without any limitation between distant communities. I think advantages of globalization outweigh its disadvantages.
On the one hand, globalization caused most companies move to developing countries where worker is cheap, so this may lead to destroys local economies and small business in developed ones. Another negative aspect of globalization is that companies sometimes exploit their employees in developing countries. In this case, salaries are low and working conditions are often poor. In addition, one of the main drawbacks of globalization is the concern that global trade hurts the environment. For instance, if a car is manufactured in Japan and then shipped to U.S., there would be some local pollution in Japan due to the manufacturing process. Some natural resources would also be used up in manufacturing the car. There would be additional resources use and pollution from transporting the car to the U.S.
However, I think that drawbacks which mentioned above are outweighed by the benefits. Firstly, Business is becoming increasingly international which means that a global economy provides free trade between countries. This may lead to people have a wider range of products to buy. Consequently, the standard of living of people will be raised. Secondly, Multi-national companies establish factories in less-developed countries which could create employment opportunities, so that people would have a higher income which may lead to increase the national productivity and contribute to the economic growth. From a financial point of view, increased liquidity of capitals allow investors in developed countries to invest in developing ones where create job opportunities is a crucial point to reduce poverty. Furthermore, globalization makes nations more homogenous. This means that, it provides equality of opportunity in various fields such as healthcare, education and employment. As a result, people who live in undeveloped countries have a relative welfare. Finally, globalization promotes cultural cohesion and cultural bonds among distant communities and also by cooperation and communication between countries, misunderstanding and conflicts can be effectively reduced. This can help strengthen political relationships.
In conclusion, the potential benefits of globalization are more significant than the possible drawbacks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'destroy'.
Suggestion: destroy
...re worker is cheap, so this may lead to destroys local economies and small business in d...
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Line 3, column 738, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
...ring the car. There would be additional resources use and pollution from transporting the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2096.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83844011142 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40698928395 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57938718663 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.5752465375 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.8 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.95 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215993979479 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682992819918 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790086483093 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154380864363 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510056419909 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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