it has been said that the world is becoming a global village in which there are no boundaries to trade and communication. do the benefits of globalization outweigh the drawbacks?
It is true that, globalization ties the world together which allows to trade and communications without any limitation between distant communities. I think advantages of globalization outweigh its disadvantages.
On the one hand, globalization caused most companies move to developing countries where worker is cheap, so this may lead to destroys local economies and small business in developed ones. Another negative aspect of globalization is that companies sometimes exploit their employees in developing countries. In this case, salaries are low and working conditions are often poor. In addition, one of the main drawbacks of globalization is the concern that global trade hurts the environment. For instance, if a car is manufactured in Japan and then shipped to U.S., there would be some local pollution in Japan due to the manufacturing process. Some natural resources would also be used up in manufacturing the car. There would be additional resources use and pollution from transporting the car to the U.S.
However, I think that drawbacks which mentioned above are outweighed by the benefits. Business is becoming increasingly international which means that a global economy provides free trade between countries. This may lead to strengthen political relationship. From a financial point of view, increased liquidity of capitals allow investors in developed countries to invest in developing ones where create job opportunities is a crucial point to reduce poverty. Furthermore, globalization makes nations more homogeneous. This means that, it provides equality of opportunity in various fields such as healthcare, education and employment. As a result, people who live in undeveloped countries have a relative welfare. Finally, globalization promotes cultural cohesion and cultural bonds among distant communities.
In conclusion, the potential benefits of globalization are more significant than the possible drawbacks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 126, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'destroy'.
Suggestion: destroy
...re worker is cheap, so this may lead to destroys local economies and small business in d...
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Line 2, column 738, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
...ring the car. There would be additional resources use and pollution from transporting the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78321678322 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34646621511 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601398601399 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2493285045 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2941176471 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245541451857 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795460174579 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821502551203 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162656449398 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488557833429 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.