A cashless society is one where people use debit/credit cards and other forms of payment instead of cash. Do the advantages of a cashless society outweigh the disadvantages?
These days, with the technological advancement in the banking system, people prefer more using electronically banking card for paying the things that they are purchasing. While I accept that traditional banknotes and coins are still have benefits, I believe that modern payment methods are more convenient than other forms.
On the one hand, cashless society would bring less privacy. When you might trust the organizations that manage your money, they would easily access to your financial transactions. In this case, your payments information is placed on data network. Therefore, the probability of internet banking frauds will be increased. Another downside of credit card is overspending. In other words, when we are careless handing over our card to make a purchase, we are often not aware of how much everything will add up at the end of the month. With cash, you physically see how much you have, and how much your funds are reducing with each purchase.
However, I would argue that these disadvantages are outweighed by advantages. A major benefit of cashless society is that a credit card allows people to afford for things that cost more than the total amount of money available in their bank account. This can be very helpful in many situations. For instance, when someone is far from home and his/her cash have been stolen, with a credit card he/she could afford to buy a flight ticket or whatever he/she needs to return home. Another advantage of cashless society is that international payments would be more easier among different countries across the world. Obviously, when you visit a foreign country, you may need to buy local currency, but payments are easy if both nations can handle cashless transactions. For another, it is now increasingly common for people to shop online where they can not use paper money and coins to pay. So people embrace the modern methods of payment which is more functional.
By way of conclusion, I think that the advantages a having credit card outweigh the disadvantages for those who are able to manage their money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...aditional banknotes and coins are still have benefits, I believe that modern payment...
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Line 3, column 555, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...is that international payments would be more easier among different countries across the wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, i think, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0261627907 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7114084413 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578488372093 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1698099221 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0555555556 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277122673317 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807163890492 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660326521387 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153905668365 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634239576739 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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