many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
It is true that, a huge number of ex-offenders break the law even though they have been punished. There are some reasons which lead to do offences by criminals. So some steps should be taken to in order to deal with this issue.
In my opinion, there main factors are to commit a crime again for lawbreaker. Firstly, offenders mix with other criminals who can be a negative influence. For instance, in the prison common criminals are put together with hardened criminals and make friends with each other. Secondly, lack of education and criminal record make finding a job more difficult, because every company employ a specialist workforce and clean, so these people who commit offences usually unemployment which leads to criminals have financial problems. Finally, many government regard offenders as isolated part of society which means that health care, education and welfare services should not be provided to them as well as other people. This social injustice and inequality leads them to think they have no other way of making a living.
Some measures should be taken to combat the problems attributed to re-offend many criminals. I think the most essential step is that government should provide education and vocational training for criminals in order to enhance personal skills and also specific job skills. Another important measure is that government should focus their attention to eliminate any kind of discrimination by provide equal opportunities for all people which requires a long-term plan and furthermore help to offenders when they are looking for accommodation and work. From a financial point of view the employer increase the income level of those people who do work more with more experience.
In conclusion, various measures must be taken to solve the problem that ex-offenders do criminal activity while being punished.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23905723906 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75341010705 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59595959596 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2152245277 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.142857143 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3571428571 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315132530823 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108467226851 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760642620508 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208528192159 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523986731266 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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