Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
It is true that many criminals do not change and keep on committing crimes even after punishment. There are several reasons for repeating crimes after serving a term and various steps can be taken to prevent such behavior at societal as well as government level.
There are a few reasons to explain the behavior of criminals after they come out serving time in prison. The main causes are unemployment, poverty, and insufficient education. In fact, employers are not likely to hire someone who broken the law and was dangerous to the community. As a result, the unemployment level will arise which leads to financial difficulty. For example, HR managers usually priority a person having many degrees than who comes back from prisons although their talent is the same. Furthermore, people who have a lack of education may feel hard for them to do jobs that need good skills and knowledge. Although the government organized many vocational courses in prison, offenders do not have a chance to develop themselves in the community honestly. In addition, prisons are a dangerous environment which has people taking part in illegal acts. Despite managing closely, criminals continue to commit a crime there.
There are several plausible approaches that can be taken by both governments and the local communities to reduce crime and re-offending. First of all, prisons should keep providing more educational or vocational training courses as knowledge and skills from these courses will help criminals connect with the community and have more chance in life. Second, the government should organize rehabilitation programmes with community service to let prisoners get close to society before being released. Furthermore, innocent people will have different looking at people who commit a crime so that improving and reforming the awareness of them should be focused on as well. Finally, the local authority needs to look for some types of work suitable for offenders, which is a good way to help them start a new life.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various causes of re-offending and both governments and domestic communities should do best to tackle this problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, honestly, if, look, may, second, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21082621083 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81987675927 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561253561254 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5720760626 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.588235294 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0588235294 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265584062627 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807319847237 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624795629217 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165386996147 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328419879619 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.