A serious problem affecting countries right across the globe is the lack of water for drinking, washing and other household uses. Why do many countries face water shortage, and what could be done to alleviate the problem?
Over the last few years, it seems that water shortage has become a serious issue which affecting the whole world. There are a variety of possible reasons for this problem, but measures could be definitely taken to tackle with it.
Water crisis in the world is getting worse as demand for water increases while the availability of resources is decreasing. One of the main reasons of this problem is that more people are using water more carelessly which means that they use excessive water for minor reasons. For instance, tap water is used to wash the car instead of using a single wet towel for cleaning which would lead to prevent wasting water. To tackle this issue, the government should not only increase water charge, especially for extra uses, while it should impose fines on water wastage such washing car at street. Another reason which may cause water shortage is that the population of the world has rapidly increased in the past 50 years which causes water consumption would be increased. This problem is exaggerated in areas with a low natural water supply. The solution is for the government to invest more on filtered water to increase resources for domestic use.
Furthermore, pollution is a major contributor to water shortage in the world today. Water pollution is due to disposal harmful substances into clean water systems by individuals as well as industries which are playing a major part in reducing the amount of water available for consumption. This problem could be addressed by designing efficient waste disposal system in order to prevent water pollution. Also, sea dumping should be strictly prohibited by authorities. The lack of water may be the consequence of agriculture. Researchers show that most of the water resources are consumed in the agriculture sector. One way to deal with this problem would be constructed efficient irrigation networks such as groundwater irrigation. Another way to prevent excessive use of water in agriculture is that crops are grown in fertile and rainy areas.
In conclusion, water lack is an urgent problem with many reasons contributing to it. Such as water wastage, increase population and human activities. To solve this problem, we should all cooperate with the government in minimizing our usage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, may, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11021505376 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73176878609 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6861121805 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.05 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294116408316 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107608937419 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423037858656 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19720618798 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256545238517 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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